I am going
to write about social tools' affect on our life. It is said that social tools
are dangerous tools which affect people very badly. We are using the social
tools more than we need; it is like an addiction. First of all, social tools
have lots of benefits, and they also make easier things for us, but everyday we
come across people who are always looking at their phones without even looking
where they are going. They also always wear their headphones. I know sometimes
you don’t want to hear what other people say, but you can’t always wear your
headphones just because you don’t want to hear other people’s problems. A
cognizant person should feel responsible for the world’s and other people’s
problems, because you live in that world with other people. People become much
more unaware of the things because of the social tools. People could be on
their phones in the company of others, they could be uploading photos and
statues every time they do something , scrolling through the news feed
constantly for updates during any spare moment. This is not living. They do not
need to make statues to tell their friends that they are having fun at a party.
They should just have a good time in the moment. Social tools are also affect
the moral values. The young girls are abused by people on the internet. These kind
of people deceive the young girls, they want explicit photos from the girls,
the girls believe them and they send the photos. After that, the person use
these photos to blackmail the girls. We should control the internet, we don’t let
the internet control us. As a conclusion, social tools affect the society,
moral values, family relationships, the physiological and physical state of
people. The social tools influence human beings in a way which is really
dangerous for them.
Hello. I enjoyed reading your blog. You have addressed a very important issue with some good wisdom. I love your sentences "This is not living" and "We should control the internet, we don't let the internet control us". I think both those things are so important for us to remember in our modern society. I also like the way you mention that we need to be ready to listen. However, I think it might have been a better paragraph if you mentioned a few practical tips on how we could accomplish this. It can be so easy to realize we are relying on technology in unhealthy ways, but so hard to stop. But I think you have done an amazing job making us think about the way we use technology and a few of the possible dangers.
YanıtlaSilHey Tuğçe!
YanıtlaSilI think you hve your point pretty clear with this article. I have to say that ı definitely agree with everything you mentioned above. Actual interaction is fading away day by day. But you could have talked about some ways to decrease the use of technology and social networking sites in our lives. As a tip, I can suggest going to sleep without our phones and not checking them the moment we wake up which is the first thing we do.
You have a few teeny tiny grammatical mistakes, but if you pay more attention you will be perfect the next time :)
You have mentioned a greatly important issue of our millenium. Thank you very much for stressing the over usage of social tools in our daily lives.